Loving You Too Much

No it's not a Hayate/Fate story

Scanlation Group: Yuri-ism

It's a Mahou Shoujo Nanoha doujin. It's an alternate universe setting where Nanoha and Fate just started dating. They're really lovey dovey, much to Hayate's annoyance.

For the second half of the story Fate is worried about Nanoha's feelings. It's still an upbeat story so this doesn't really get super angsty or anything.

Yuri Level: 9 out of 10
It's definitely yuri, but Nanoha's feelings aren't fully expressed. That's why it's not 10 out of 10. It's a minor thing really.

You can go here to download it.

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Loving You Too Much (Yuri-ism version)